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I was actually surprised when I received my essay back seeing that B- felt pretty good considering I felt nothing but doubt when turning the essay in. I think I lacked on providing more of what I actually understand from diction, syntax, theme, or tone. I felt like I could've preformed a better job if it wasn't for my distractions and tiredness. But I hope to achieve a better job on the next assignment considering I actually have high expectations of myself. So there it is.

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